Jim, I appreciate the honest feedback, and I might take you up on the offer to try again. Video is a work in progress for me--not so comfortable in front of the camera yet. :) Getting this thing tightened up would be of great benefit to us moving forward so this is a great service you're providing.
We provide sales and marketing solutions. Things such as SEO, social media optimization, direct marketing, sales and marketing alignment, training, etc. How would you explain that in 15 seconds so it hooked someone's attention?
Roger
TrishaLyn
· 1 year ago
Maybe if the statistic is left out at the beginning of the pitch there'd be more room for the meat & potatoes of what the service really is. I like this one a lot.
Systeme D'alarme
· 1 year ago
This is great marketing technique, hard to achieve but can be very useful if you master it I think,
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I appreciate the honest feedback, and I might take you up on the offer to try again. Video is a work in progress for me--not so comfortable in front of the camera yet. :) Getting this thing tightened up would be of great benefit to us moving forward so this is a great service you're providing.
We provide sales and marketing solutions. Things such as SEO, social media optimization, direct marketing, sales and marketing alignment, training, etc. How would you explain that in 15 seconds so it hooked someone's attention?
Roger