http://jimkukral.disqus.com/enSun, 04 May 2008 04:55:23 -0000http://www.jimkukral.com/elevator-pitch-onemansgoalcom/#comment-412524That wasn't very good, not very noteworthy and I almost didn't remember a word you said writing this comment now. I'd like to see what Kukral thinks about this one, I'm giving the thumbs down, but a nice attempt!JimSun, 04 May 2008 04:55:23 -0000http://www.jimkukral.com/elevator-pitch-onemansgoalcom/#comment-400152You could try squeezing your name in when you say "posts by me, Marc ____, " and then go on with the sentence. It might push it to 16-17 seconds but I'm not sure if the time is absolutely important to be dead on... Jim?TrishaLynThu, 01 May 2008 01:42:23 -0000http://www.jimkukral.com/elevator-pitch-onemansgoalcom/#comment-365693I wanted to say my name but didn't have time in the 15 seconds. When I started with my name it caused me to speak faster and it was harder to understand what i was saying. What would you recommend me taking out of the video to add my name (the video came in at a full 15 seconds)<br>Thanks you <br><br>MarcOnemansgoalTue, 22 Apr 2008 18:15:24 -0000