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Jim Kukral: Elevator Pitch: Onemansgoal.com

  • Onemansgoal · 1 year ago
    I wanted to say my name but didn't have time in the 15 seconds. When I started with my name it caused me to speak faster and it was harder to understand what i was saying. What would you recommend me taking out of the video to add my name (the video came in at a full 15 seconds)
    Thanks you

    Marc
  • TrishaLyn · 1 year ago
    You could try squeezing your name in when you say "posts by me, Marc ____, " and then go on with the sentence. It might push it to 16-17 seconds but I'm not sure if the time is absolutely important to be dead on... Jim?
  • Jim · 1 year ago
    That wasn't very good, not very noteworthy and I almost didn't remember a word you said writing this comment now. I'd like to see what Kukral thinks about this one, I'm giving the thumbs down, but a nice attempt!